Proposal title

My proposal is to make a better living environment for the local orphanages.

Researching about orphans reveals that when children are detached from their parents, they can suffer from traumas. This was verified due to John Bowlby's attachment theory focuses on a child’s behaviour and attitude toward their adulthood. How this affects their adult care giving due to their lack of parental attachment. Children who for some reason are not with their parents. Whether it be that their parents have died, abandoned them, abused them or could not afford to sustain their life.

I want to tackle their psychology issues using colours, textures, patterns and nature. I believe that bettering their environment, would lead to them adapting easier and faster to their new life, in an orphanage.

First, I came up with the title "To improve the interior space of a local orphanages." However there was something wrong with the title. As I analysed the title I thought that maybe the title was too elaborate. Maybe I needed to emphasise exactly on what I was going to tackle.

I brainstorm some keywords on what I needed to tackle in this proposal.
What was the problem I'm solving?
Then I came up with my new title.

"The impact of interior design on the emotional wellbeing of children as applied to local orphanages"

I prefer this title because I'm pointing out exactly what I'm focussing on. The emotional wellbeing of orphans!